Showcase Written Feedback: Further improvements

Alongside feedback confirming we had achieved our initial aims for the opening, we did receive useful feedback if we were to repeat the entire process. The most common observation was that the writing of "Friday" should be made bigger so easier to read. We had wanted to fit the writing under the protagonist on the guttering so could not be made any bigger. Ideally we wouldn't want the writing to take up a large proportion of the frame but if we received further feedback mentioning it we could have considered making more of a point of it.